Is this a good college essay?

College Essays
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<p>I wrote this essay a while ago and plan to use it on applications this coming fall as a my personal statement or a supplemental essay required by the college.</p>

<p>Is anyone willing to use help me out and tell me if it's good?</p>

<p>Please give me your sincere opinion. Thanks.</p>

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<p>Sure, you can send it to me.</p>

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<p>would be glad to help. pm it over.</p>

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<p>ill take a look</p>

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<p>Please send it to me if you have time?? Thanks!</p>