<p>I want to get into a top school. My essay is about a place i feel perfectly content and mine about the computer and its educational value. Do you think I can make this into a good essay topic.</p>
<p>You need to focus on one specific topic… I’m assuming you plan on writing about a “place [you] feel perfectly content” ub and “about the computer and its educational value.” However, you really need to focus on one spcific thing that really had an impact on your life. Hope this helps!</p>
<p>I like the first one. </p>