Is this essay too risky?

<p>We know you lead a busy life, full of activities, many of which are required of you. Tell us about something you do for the pleasure of it. (*)(100 words or fewer)</p>

<p>I think I’m addicted.
Every night it’s the same routine, right before I sleep, right when I need one last feel of pure bliss. It’s really my only escape from a stressful life. I’ve done it since I was twelve grab one of the many tubes carefully arranged around my room and inhale deeply, already sensing the euphoria about to come. </p>

<p>I'm not even close to done, just drafting. It's going to end with how the tube is a flute though! It's actually not about drugs! My friend still thought it was too risky though. I thought it might give the admissions office a little laugh when they realize it's something benign. Idk what do you guys think?</p>

<p>I like it. The element of surprise is always welcome. </p>

<p>No I think its rather clever</p>

<p>@PuffDaddy‌ LMAO OMG BAAHAHHHA THIS IS HILARIOUS</p>

<p>(btw i love ur username lmao) </p>

<p>I read it and at first… thought it was something sexual…and not about drugs (i eventually realized it was about drugs but something just made me think it was about sex idk lol) -----
This seems risky, but hey, fortune favors the bold!</p>

<p>Go for it, and good luck! </p>

<p>I say go for it; it’s a good premise and it builds suspense.</p>

<pre><code> I think I’m addicted.
Every night it’s the same routine, right before I sleep, right when I need one last feel of pure bliss. It’s my only escape from my social, athletic, and academic life, and has been so since sixth grade when I first started. I grab one of the many instruments of pleasure carefully arranged around my room and inhale deeply, already sensing the euphoria about to come. My breathe comes back out and runs back through the tube as the melodious tunes of my flute fill my ears.
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<p>How is it? I feel like instruments of pleasure sounds like I have anal beads or something but I can’t think of something other than tubes (too druggy), instruments (which gives it away sorta), or instruments of pleasure. Any ideas?</p>

<p>I think it’s amazing ahahahaha</p>

<p>Edit: great username too aha</p>