<p>While I will appreciate any advice you guys can give me, I know you're all pretty busy and so my one question is for the general idea:</p>
<p>Should I talk about the hobbies I have now and my passion in them, or is the essay fine as it is (i.e. the reader can assume I have the same passions in my hobbies today, and the focus should stick to the graphic design)?</p>
<p>Of course the question makes more sense after reading the essay, so I will PM it to whoever would be so kind to help me.</p>