Jumping on the bandwagon... essay!

Colleges & Universities A-Z University of Notre Dame
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<p>Yes, I'm yet another paranoid and freaking-out senior, and I've got some concerns about this essay of mine (I'm applying EA... my stats are in another post). However, I'd like to see if anyone else points out the same things before I go writing fifty more.</p>

<p>However, I feel a little uncomfortable with posting it right out (not that I think it's good enough that anyone would want to rip it off, or anything! :))... so if anyone would be willing to read it and just offer some very general suggestions (even just a "this sucks!" or "this is good enough!"), leave a post and I'll PM you! Thanks in advance to anyone who's willing!</p>

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<p>I'll read it if you like. I'm not an expert but I'm willing to help</p>

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<p>I had my rough draft critiqued by my classmate.</p>

<p>He says that it needs a clear purpose.</p>

<p>It's back to brainstorming for me.</p>

<p>I'll check yours out.</p>

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<p>Thanks guys!</p>

<p>Any more takers? I've gotten some mixed opinions... I need a tie-breaker or three! :)</p>

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<p>umm.. I'll take a look at it....but I'm in your same shoes...so by far not an expert</p>