<p>I used Alex Rodriguez and our Founding Fathers.</p>
<p>i used Ulysses s grant, Odysseus in the odyseey, and elliot sptizer from NY in my essay</p>
<p>I used someone I know’s facial deformity and how it initially effected her goals of being an actress.
And Charles Darwin.</p>
<p>guys wat was the experimental?</p>
<p>On the essay:
If both examples were real world, is that okay?
Like if mine were both political examples (Nixon/Clinton), would it be legit if i exlained them enough?</p>
<p>I talked about the French Revolution & it benefitting from the American Revolution, Of Mice and Men where George gives up on the American Dream (I think), and the Stimulus Package and it’s New Deal counterpart… I hope those are legit examples</p>
<p>^ I wanted to do Of Mice and Men but I forgot the author >.></p>
<p>I did Obama/JFK (similarities between Cuba and potentially North Korea), The Scarlet Letter (Pearl learns to accept flaws from her mother’s initial flaw – she accepts Dimmesdale), and personal experience. Ran out of room, had to erase to fit it all in XD</p>
<p>which writing section was the experimental? do we know yet?</p>
<p>I had an experimental writing section but I’m not sure what to remember it by… It was section 6 for me, if that matters, haha. I think it’s the one that talked about the gorilla paintings that sold for a lot. But idk if that was experimental or not.</p>
<p>is it “taking a nap” or “by taking a nap”</p>
<p>I definitely had a writing experimental but i’m not sure which one it was - I got one with the improv sentences - GORILLAS & ART and the other one PARROT LANGUAGE.</p>
<p>How many No error did you get?</p>
<p>The last (number 29) i got no error, number 28 was a tricky one but “appears” is wrong</p>
<p>overall i got 2 no errors</p>
<p>the skier one, was that just “she thrilled audience and captured more gold medals…”</p>
<p>Gorillas one was experimental</p>
<p>i got 2 or 3 no errors, i was kinda iffy about those though. and i think it was that 1232cricket…</p>
<p>how do yall think yall did on the essay?
I wanna say 12/12 :D</p>
<p>I got 3 no errors.</p>
<p>Essay I would say 10+. My examples didn’t really fit the topic, but I made them fit and they had one characteristic about each seemed flawed. My second example was the worst. However the thesis, conclusion, and length were all good.</p>
<p>soooooo, im guessing the ant lion one was experimental?</p>
<p>If so, that would be absolutely fantabulous!</p>
<p>^yea it was i dont remember that one.</p>
<p>the one about city and castles was no error?</p>
<p>the one about winston chruchill (last oen was no error)</p>
<p>i got the appear_s one as an error but i could be wrong…it was like “why appears…” followed by a plural noun.</p>
<p>I believe I had a lion one…</p>
<p>I had the math experimental.</p>
<p>for city and castles was debating between picking “it” and “no error”. i think i put no error, because it said the castles protected it or something, so it wasn’t very ambiguous
and I put appear and not appears</p>
<p>^ I put no error too. It seemed right.</p>