<p>Hey,
I am looking for someone (preferably an adult) to ready my college essay. I am afraid of wordiness and I've been told that it needs a bit more of a focus. The problem is that I need everything in it to truly convey my story. If anyone would like to read it and try to help me tie it together I would greatly appreciate it. Again, I would prefer an adult or a really good writer.</p>
<p>Thanks</p>