<p>Hi all! I have written two separate essay drafts for the Common App, and I was wondering if anybody would be interested in reading them, giving critique, etc. I'd prefer that those who read it be non-high schoolers, if possible.</p>
<p>Thanks in advance!</p>
<p>Bump </p>
<p>I’m still a high-schooler but if you want, I can do it for you lol.</p>
<p>Yeah, thanks! PM your info?</p>
<p>I used these guys… It was PAINFUL ~ lol but man did my essay look good when it was all over! It was pretty funny too, because my english teach looked over it in about 5 min and was like, “yeah that’s great” ~~~ but I wanted to be sure, so my mom found the link and decided to try it… and they blew the whole thing up… then helped me put it back together ;(<br>
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<p>I can read!</p>
<p>[Not trying to discredit anyone on here at all as they’re most likely all wonderful people, but I would be very cautious about sending your essay to posters with low post counts… sending it to trusted, long-time members of the forums is best. 
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<p><a href=“http://www.Kibin.com”>www.Kibin.com</a> is also a good service to get professional essay editing.</p>
<p>I will read and give good feedback </p>
<p>I’m a Duke alum. I will read it and provide feedback. PM me</p>
<p>I’m still a high-schooler but if you want, I can do it for you lol.</p>