last-minute college essay critiques

Pre-College Issues High School Life
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<p>I can't possibly be the only one still working, right?</p>

<p>I've got one essay that I'm having a lot of trouble getting right; if anyone would be willing to quickly look it over and give some general impressions I'd be eternally grateful. (And would, of course, reciprocate.)</p>

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<p>I'll give you some feedback if you'd like.</p>

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<p>Thanks very much :) I've PMed you a link.</p>

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<p>oh, i want to//(reciprocate!)</p>

<p>pm it to me.;)</p>