Last Minute Essay Critique?

<p>Hello, everyone. I'm wondering if anyone here is interested in reading my application essay? I tried to make it more personal and light-hearted, but I don't know if that made it light on details. Anyone interested?</p>

<p>I’m willing. But, shouldn’t all your essays be in already?</p>

<p>It’s for an Honors College. Deadline is March 1st. I sent it to you rocket6louise.</p>

<p>Anyone else?</p>

<p>Sure</p>

<p>10char</p>

<p>One more? Advice has been great so far.</p>