Look at my UC essay? wrote in 30 mins need feedback

<p>Hi, so I already submitted my essays. The thing is that I wrote my essay for the 2nd prompt in a few hours and think it turned out decent. But… I wrote my essay for the 1st prompt in like 30 minutes right before the deadline lol. No one has read either of my essays (not even me tbh) which makes me nervous so if someone would be willing to read my #1 essay that'd be great. I just want reassurance.</p>

<p>p.s. Sorry for terrible grammar/punctuation in my post, it's 2am. I promise my essay isn't this bad lol.</p>

<p>Hi i’ll be willing to read it. Can you PM it to me? And can you also read/critique my essays?</p>