Look over my personal statement?

College Essays
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I just finished drafting my Common AP personal statement. The prompt I chose is “Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story”.

I think I have an interesting premise, and really want to execute it well. Would anybody e willing to look over it?

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Sure! PM me.

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I don’t mind looking over it.

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Alright, I’ll pm you

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If you need another opinion, PM me :slight_smile:

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Bump. I’ve made a lot of edits. I think it’s a lot better now. Anyone willing give me some fresh opinions.

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PM me.

I would recommend NOT sending them to high school kids thouhg