Lookover my NYU essay?

College Essays
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<p>Overall, I'm happy with it! Could I just have some thoughts on it though? Specifically the conclusion? Thanks a lot!!</p>

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<p>I’ll look through it, PM please</p>

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<p>hey. id be really interested in reading it too. please PM it to me as well</p>

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<p>id love to read it… PM me</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to</p>

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<p>i’ll read it.</p>

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<p>I’ll look at it.
But I’m a 2014er too, so it’s okay if you don’t want me to. I completely understand.</p>

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<p>Hey PM me!</p>

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<p>hey i know u posted this a while ago, but i’ll read your essay if you still want. PM it! i’m not applying to NYU</p>

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<p>go ahead and PM me.</p>