Moog scholarship essay

Colleges and Universities A-Z Washington University in St. Louis
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<p>Hi everyone,</p>

<p>I'm planning to submit my materials for Moog today. I was wondering if anyone would like to take a look at my scholarship essay before I send it in. I'd prefer someone with a strong background in biology research or someone who has received the scholarship in the past.</p>

<p>Oh, and please feel free to give as much constructive criticism as possible. If there are a lot of change I need to make, I'll send it in later, but please, by all means, let me know! I want this essay to be really good.</p>

<p>Please PM me your email address if you're willing. I'll come back home around 2:30, so I'll send it to you around then.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you want. I have a little bit of background in biology, I think, but the problem is that I’m applying to the same scholarship and haven’t sent out my application yet.:)</p>

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<p>^ If you want to read it, feel free to PM me your email and I’ll send it to you. I don’t want to take time away from you working on your own app, though, so if you don’t have the time to read it, don’t worry about it.</p>

<p>Good luck!</p>