My common app essay for 1/15 schools...

[trangham]

<p>....Please help me proofread it....</p>

<p>Thanks a lot.</p>

[Aininor]

<p>I would like to help. Just PM me.</p>

[raza999]

<p>I ll give u feedback.</p>

[flyboy]

<p>I'll help, too.</p>

[mastertek]

<p>i will help, pm me</p>