my common essay written in 2 hours, help me evaluate

College Essays
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<p>It's recently submitted, so urgent, I wrote 2 essays in 4 hours (1AM to 4AM) to submit before noon the day after
Please help me evaluate it, I will pm as many as possible :)</p>

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<p>I will read the essay. Please give me the essay, I will read it. I will read your essay.</p>

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<p>I would like to review it. PM if you want.</p>

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<p>I ll give you feedback ASAP</p>

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<p>I'll read it if you would please read mine. (See the culture essay thread).</p>

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<p>I'll also read if you read mine (see unsure about which commonapp topic thread)</p>

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<p>anyone else??????</p>

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<p>Sure... I'll read. You want us to give an overall impression?</p>

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<p>I'll give you some good feed back, but i'll most likely do it after dinner.</p>

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<p>no prolem if you want to send it to me.</p>

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<p>ill read it too</p>

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<p>sure.. i feel like ripping someone's essay apart right now</p>

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<p>can take a look.</p>