<p>how should i change that i feel that ny conclusion is always my introduction reworded</p>
<p>try to add at the end, as your last sentence, and broader and more general insight that the topic broadens into…</p>
<p>for example, if your essay is about taking a risk, at the end you could say, “because if no one took a risk, we would all be standing where we are, in our first positions, eternally in place.” or something corny like that…the cb people like that if it works well. </p>
<p>-2400er</p>
<p>An essay is an argument. It should build and develop.</p>
<p>Think of your essay as a journey through an idea. You leave home (intro), visit three destinations (examples), and return home (conclusion).</p>
<p>Yes, you return to where you started, but if the journey was worth taking then you’ve changed along the way. You’re not the same person at the end of the journey as you were at the beginning. What did you learn?</p>
<p>In The Wizard of Oz, Dorothy goes on a journey, meets the Tin Man, the Scarecrow, and the Lion, then returns home. What did she learn? “There’s no place like home.” She started and ended at the same place, but her conclusion reflects the journey.</p>
<p>Hope this helps.</p>
<p>^ i loved that, thanks…it helps a lot!</p>