My essay about defeat... Anyone willing to read my rough draft?

<p>Getting this out on paper is harder than I thought it would be...</p>

<p>Is anyone willing to read my rough draft? This is very, very rough mind you ;)</p>

<p>if your essay is “very very rough” then you should spend a bit more time fixing it. once you have done so, you can PM me the essay and i’l give you some feed back</p>

<p>I’ll critique it, PM it over :)</p>

<p>Sure, I’ll read it for you. PM me over.</p>

<p>Sure, i’m read and help.
pm it.</p>

<p>I’ll read it over for you too.</p>

<p>I’ll give it a read :)</p>

<p>sure, pm it over</p>

<p>sure pm it if you have a chance</p>

<p>Okay I sent out my draft to everyone who said they would read it.</p>

<p>If you guys want me to read anything of yours I would be happy to.</p>

<p>Could anyone else help me out? This essay means a lot to me…</p>

<p>I’ve gotten some good feedback so far from the two people who have responded…</p>

<p>Anyone else willing to look it over? I would prefer that people respond when I send it out, though.</p>

<p>i’ll read your essay pm it to me bro</p>