My Essay

<p>Would anybody mind reading it? I only have the first one, the one about an activity so far. Any feedback would be great.</p>

<p>sure just PM me</p>

<p>sure I'll read it too</p>

<p>i am willing to read it</p>

<p>I'll reed it pm me</p>

<p>I'll read it and give you my thoughts if you send it to me by monday. Cuz after monday, I have no time.</p>

<p>ill read it</p>

<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>PM me, I'd be glad to look it over</p>

<p>that sounds like fun!</p>

<p>i'll read it too!</p>

<p>illl read it</p>

<p>Your essay is nice! I like it a lot although there are a few lines where you should watch your tone to the subject. I'll pm you!</p>

<p>Sure, I'd love to read it. I've been my friends' college essays for awhile now and I'd love to help.</p>

<p>i'll read it :)</p>

<p>i'll read it too</p>

<p>i'd love to read it!</p>

<p>send it over</p>

<p>I'll read it too!</p>

<p>if you still want more opinions, i'll comment, too</p>