<p>So, I've finally finished my essay on 4th prompt. It's a short story, but I tried to add some "significance" to it, which hopefully made it more interesting... just looking for someone to read it and give me some feedback.</p>
<p>If you'd like to read it just post here, but I may not send it to you if I feel I've had enough readers or if you're in my applicant pool, hope you'll understand.</p>
<p>lol from a psychological point of view, that last sentence might be turning people away =/</p>
<p>Anyone care to help? I'm so scared that my essay makes no sense... I tried to do some sort of a "story in a story" thing.</p>
<p>hey! the 'story in the story' thing was my line!</p>
<p>He's right! :P</p>
<p>edit: wait, you mean that in a "why didn't you credit me" kind of way? I just thought that'd be a good description of what I did in the essay....</p>
<p>you can feel free to send it to me, ill read it and offer some insight. i am very nervous about it too.</p>
<p>hey i'd love to read your essay. i'm actually applying to uchicago too but i did essay option 3 (borges and i). so if you want to swap essays, i'm all for it.</p>
<p>azwe718 - PM me - I can look at it tomorrow.</p>