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<p>Initially written for a dear, dear friend (girlfriend?) Anyway, I thought that I'd do this forum a service by sharing a good story. Bon appetit!</p>

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<p>“Bonjour, Monsieur. Name, please.”</p>

<p>My name. The hotel clerk needed it to find my reservation. </p>

<p>Never would I have seen myself ten years ago as an iterant, living in hotel after hotel. </p>

<p>Neither did I know ten years ago that I had Huntington’s disease. </p>

<p>H.D. </p>

<p>These acronyms had acquired such meaning after I found out that I was afflicted by Huntington’s disease. I remember studying Huntington’s, impersonally, in my high school biology class. An insidious neurodegenerative disease, there exists no cure. Sufferers gradually lose motor control and cognitive abilities. There was no emotion involved in delineating the causes, symptoms, and dire prognosis. Now, I wonder why can’t the acronyms stand for something more cheerful, such as homecoming date? C’est la vie. </p>

<p>Ten years ago my dad had passed away. Of the few things I still remember clearly is that day. It was a cruel twist of fate on the interstate. A suspect heading south on I-95 had decided it would be a great idea to make a U-turn via the grassy median. If my dad had left work just seconds earlier, or later, he would have avoided his unfortunate fate – the suspect would perhaps have slammed into some other unfortunate person’s car, or no car at all. If my dad had missed that green light … if my dad had decided to get some gas before getting on the interstate. Enough. Life is a battle. Although the rules of engagement may be absurd, each breath we take is a tacit acknowledgement. </p>

<p>Through the crack of the master bedroom door that night, I saw my mom weeping. I tip-toed in. I hadn’t even said anything before her sobbing increased tenfold. Was it something I had done? Was I not a good child? Perhaps I too closely resembled my dad; after all, he had passed away earlier that day. </p>

<p>A few years ago my mom also died. Fortunately, however, it was a peaceful exit. Just before she passed, she pressed an envelope into my hand. It was addressed to “my dearest and only son.” I had stuffed it away in my jacket pocket at first. Only a few weeks after her last breath did I open the letter. Like only nibbling a cookie in my childhood to preserve its tasty goodness, I held off reading the letter, so my experiences with my mom wouldn’t be limited to the time of her last breath, but instead drawn out, if only for a little while longer. </p>

<p>Upon reading the letter I was filled with disgust. Disgust later subsided to anger. Anger, then numbness, then finally a grudging acceptance. </p>

<p>My dad died not in a car accident but because of Huntington’s disease. The puzzle pieces fell into place. Finally, I understood his dementia. Finally, I understood why his birthday cards stopped coming in the mail like clockwork. Finally, I understood why he started referring to me as “Mister” on occasion. </p>

<p>Perhaps the bigger bombshell was that my mom also had Huntington’s disease. This again would explain her memory loss. And her uncontrollable shaking. I had attributed both my parents’ symptoms to old age and natural degeneration. </p>

<p>Knowledge is not power. I nearly collapsed when the genetic implications dawned upon me. Huntington’s is an autosomal dominant disease. So if only my dad had Huntington’s, I would have had a 50% chance of inheriting Huntington’s. A flip of the coin. Unfortunately, both my parents had Huntington’s. </p>

<p>The damned fools. Both of them had Huntington’s, both of them knew from an early age, and yet they decided to have me. They knew all their children would be doomed. Those lovesick and foolish birds. I guess love really knows no boundaries; that love really is irrational. Huntington’s is my destiny.</p>

<p>And this I guess explains why I’m here at this unfamiliar hotel in Paris. I’ve taken to traveling ever since I’ve learned my about my biology. Biology is destiny, I remember one of my teachers telling me. I think I remember him … that was junior year. Or was that senior year? Huntington’s has already started taking its toll on me. </p>

<p>I’ve estranged myself from everyone through travel, as I know I’ll inevitably die early. There is no point in continuing or forming attachments with others. Also, I always wanted to see the world before I died. Once a distant daydream, now a reality. </p>

<p>I know that I’ll be gone in a few more years. I have virtually no chance of living past 35, since I have not one but two alleles for Huntington’s. It’s 2026 now, and I’m 31. In a few years, I’ll probably collapse on a train to somewhere, hopelessly convulsing. People will gawk and wonder about the identity of that frothing and likely insane person. Or maybe I’ll be alone in my hotel room at night, reminiscing over times and fortunes past. I’ll probably be listening to Steven Tyler bellow “what could have been love” when I suddenly collapse, unable to breathe, choke on my own saliva, and asphyxiate – alone. Just as there is no greater joy than companionship, there is perhaps no greater evil than loneliness … </p>

<p>The couple behind me coughs. What passive-aggressiveness. Whatever. I had better figure out and tell the hotel clerk my name soon. </p>

<p>My name was Hamlet, for I once always vacillated. Paralyzed by thought. I remember my high school days. Greeting someone in the hallway would exhaust me of my courage for the day, much less reaching out for a handshake or a hug. Rejection lurked behind every smile. I feared even the nicest of people – behind their genuine smiles somewhere lurked a “no” or a disgusted look that said “get off me.” </p>

<p>My name was Okonkwo, for I once always despised weakness, whether it be in me, or in others. I once donned facades, masks, veneers, to cover the emotional turbulence within me. Having no one to express my most intimate feelings to, I bottled it all up within me. I lavishly applied makeup each morning before school. I thought that a stoic calm at school would predispose me to feelings of attraction. It only took six years of experience to learn that it did not. </p>

<p>My name was Maxine Hong Kingston, for I once always saw life as a battle. Everyone was the enemy, I was the warrior. The lone warrior. It was me against the world. Few and rare were friends. That guy who smiled and said “hello” to me in the hallway? He’s teasing me. That girl who liked “my glasses”? She’s making fun of my face. </p>

<p>My name was Kurtz, for I once possessed an immense heart of darkness. A heart of lead. Dark, cold, hard, heavy, and poisonous. Nothing, no one, could touch it. No. That would show weakness, vulnerability. </p>

<p>My name was Meursault, for I once was empty. I was only a shell of a human being. Behind the thin veneer lay only a stormy sea of emotions. </p>

<p>I used to be Hamlet, Okonkwo, Kingston, Kurtz, and Meursault. That is, until I met, and got to know, her. I can’t exactly recall her name now; I think Huntington’s is to blame. But I do remember our trepid advances. </p>

<p>We were two birds. In adjacent cages. Until I finally brushed off my tendency to vacillate, and finally found someone to whom I could open my heart. I stopped seeing the world in black-and-white; me as the warrior, and everyone else as the foe. I found someone who forged something beautiful from my heart of lead. I found someone for whom I was gladly willing to break the rules. I found someone that made getting up and going to school easier each day. I found someone in whom I could confide my deepest thoughts without fear of embarrassment. I found someone who infused new meaning into my monotonous life of hitting the books each and every single day in order to one day have a successful job.
Job – I scoff at the idea now. This whole paradigm of studying hard in school, getting a high-paying job, starting a family, and living the rest of our endless numbered days in bliss has a hidden premise – that our days are really endless. Mine aren’t. I have at most only a few more years left before I exhaust my stay on this earthly world. </p>

<p>I still remember the idyllic days in which I would go to the playground on the weekends, sit in a swing by myself, listen to “You Are Not Alone,” and occasionally push on the adjacent swing, as if to symbolize her presence. Unfortunately, it only took a year for me to brush away my shyness. We went our separate ways after senior year. If I remember correctly, she went to college somewhere in Florida, while I wound up somewhere else. One of those Southern states. I don’t (can’t) remember. Nor do I want to. I don’t want to stir up old feelings of attachment. It would be best if she forgot about me, as I would inevitably be gone in a few years. No need to amplify any feelings of loss. Best to just disappear quietly, unbeknownst to anyone. Once alone, always alone. </p>

<p>“Monsieur …” The hotel clerk has an impatient look, head tilted, her eyebrows raised, and brow furrowed. She taps her index finger three times against the counter. </p>

<p>Drat. I need to remember the name I used over the phone when booking this hotel. But I can’t recall – Huntington’s has been tightening its noose. I give it my best guess – “Meursault” – after all, this was Paris, France, and I might have thought that a French pseudonym would be appropriate at the time I booked the room … </p>

<p>“Room 233. Second floor. Have a nice day. Bonne journ</p>

<p>IceQube,</p>

<p>You never cease to amaze me with your literary mind.</p>

<p>Thank you! Perhaps my favorite line …</p>

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<p>What aspect or line do you like the best?</p>

<p>^you are seriously my favorite poster!</p>

<p>Wow, it’s hard to believe you’re in high school. That was incredible.</p>

<p>Possibly a little pretentious, but I like it.</p>

<p>Love this!</p>

<p>Oh snap guys! Thank you all :). </p>

<p>I have a phenomenal part II cooked up, but she has first dibs on it ;). Will keep you guys posted!</p>

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<p>I also have a heart-annihilating part III … can’t wait to post it!</p>

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<p>Looks like I also have a part IV!</p>

<p>For those thinking that I’m dragging it out too long … trust me, it’s going to be good. As in depressing, heart-shattering, tear-jerking sort of good. Not good good. But sad good.</p>

<p>Can’t wait I’m subscribed!</p>

<p>Qube–In your Pulitzer Prize acceptance speech, don’t forget to thank us.</p>

<p>Seriously, I enjoy reading your short stories, they are very good. Keep writing.</p>

<p>Part II</p>

<p>Lurking behind the five-o’clock shade and milk mustache was that same familiar face from decades ago. </p>

<p>Decades ago we sat in our blue gowns and mortarboards. He swapped seats with someone, despite the directive to sit in alphabetical order. Inching up to me, he leaned in and touched my hand. I squeezed as he whispered to me “I’ll be at our 10th reunion. Will you be there?” </p>

<p>Looking into his eyes, I immediately replied in the affirmative. He smiled and squeezed my hand. </p>

<p>And there we sat, hand in hand. The announcers were still in the Cs. No worries, and no rush, since he was next to me. </p>

<p>“I can’t believe it. It’s been a whirlwind. An exhilarating one. I’ll miss you, and your rule-breaking antics – skipping statistics; swapping seats – you are quite the bad kid” I tease. </p>

<p>Although he is gazing toward the announcers, I can tell he’s smiling; I can see his faint laugh lines. He turns toward me – suddenly – and is all laughs, as if I had executed some perfect punch line. </p>

<p>But the broad smile suddenly disappears. I sandwich his hand with both of mine.</p>

<p>“What’s wrong?”</p>

<p>“Nothing! Well, there’s something I always wanted to tell you, or, more precisely, finish. I’ve always wanted to develop that bird metaphor with you. I now know why the caged bird sings. Your song – prose and poetry – is so beautiful; it captured the melancholy of your existence and resonated with me. And there is no better feeling than knowing that there’s just someone who cares, who’ll read, comprehend, and understand all your angst. But we were caged birds. In adjacent cages. We’ve since escaped our cages. You opened up to me, and I to you, through song and otherwise. Your tested your wings; I tested mine too. Now, you’re ready to migrate. I won’t clip your wings! Spread your wings far apart, and take flight! Seek out the esoteric! Find joy in the new! Suck the marrow out life!”</p>

<p>He shifts in his seat, but his melancholic gaze is steady. </p>

<p>“Enjoy college! Although we may be separated, we’ll always return home each holiday! Birds, do, after all, have a strong sense of home; birds were often used to carry secret messages during war because they could not only deliver the messages but also return home. Think of that! Wouldn’t that be romantic – if I sent you letters via carrier pigeon! In any case – maybe during your senior year, I’ll show up in a local Starbucks, and just sit at a table, and wait for you to walk in. And if you recognize me, and if memories of all our exploits and conversations come to mind, then perhaps I am that one special person of yours. If you don’t, no worries! You’ve found your wings and home lies elsewhere for you. I’ll still be happy because I’ll be able to say that I, in part, helped you find your wings.”</p>

<p>“I don’t want us to drift …”</p>

<p>My name is called. </p>

<p>From then on we occasionally communicated, and even met up a few times. At first I was so eager to share with him what college was like each and every single day. Later, however, my interest subsided; there was just too much to explain without him actually being there. Plus, I had other people – friends – occupying my mind. Girlfriends, boyfriends, general friends, and of course, teachers’ assistants. </p>

<p>He similarly drifted apart. It was as if we were stranded at sea. It was like the movie Titanic, only worse, since in the movie, only Rose survived to face the continual assault of life. Jack escaped. It was as if we hung onto a single plank for dear life, but our plank split, and we each hung on to separate pieces as the chaotic rolls of the tide swept us apart. I cried, and cried, and cried to Poseidon for mercy, but no one listened.
On the eve of our 10th, I had long since fallen out of touch with him. I didn’t even know what state he lived in. That is, if he even lived in the United States any more. But I did remember our promise. He always had a special reverence for promises. </p>

<p>I had prepared all day for our 10th. I almost decided to wear my prom dress, for old times’ sake. I eventually decided on a more classy – well, conservative – turquois dress. </p>

<p>Would he recognize me? Would he be … different? Where would he be in life? </p>

<p>He never showed up. At first I thought it was a fault of my own, not recognizing him. I looked around all for him. I asked around all for him. No one seemed to remember him from high school. It was as if I was the last person who was aware of his existence. “Who?” people would ask, half-inquisitively and half-confused. “Nope, never heard of him.” </p>

<p>Perhaps it was all a dream. Perhaps he was a figment of my imagination. Perhaps my fading memory had transplanted a character from one of my stories to my real life. Perhaps it was all just an idyllic dream. I mean, at some points, it – he – did seem too good to be true. Perhaps I was diseased. I shudder as I recall my high school biology class. No, it’s not the memories of the IAs that are bothering me this time; it’s the presentations on all those genetic disorders, from Alzheimer’s to Bloom Syndrome to Huntington’s. Perhaps I had one of these disorders and I was just hopelessly confused, and he lived only in the realm of my stories. I break out in a sweat as I remember my philosophy class. Perhaps we really can’t be sure of anything other than ourselves. Perhaps solipsism is the only valid philosophy. Or perhaps esse est percipi (to exist is to be perceived) – as soon I turned around from that “bye” and that last peck on the cheek on June 6th, 2013 – he ceased to exist. </p>

<p>I can finally have a measure of reassurance now. That day in the coffee shop – I knew it was him. He existed after all. </p>

<p>And now I overwhelming know that he exists. </p>

<p>Or existed. </p>

<p>It is 2035. Our 10th was twenty-two years ago. My assurance of his existence almost faded until I “met” him in the coffee shop 9 years ago. And just a few weeks ago I received the ultimate confirmation.</p>

<p>A person had gone skydiving with his instructor. The skydiver’s name was ostensibly Okonkwo. And just before when Okonkwo was supposed to pull the pin to release his parachute, he told his flight instructor that had finally “figured it out.” That he was truly happy, because of “birdie,” that he was “ready,” that he wished the “unfortunate circumstances” he was trapped in were different, but that nonetheless “this is it.” </p>

<p>A “complete nutcase” the Minneapolis Times had concluded. </p>

<p>But I concluded differently.</p>

<p>Part III !!! Can’t wait to see what happens</p>

<p>You’re lovely. This in return is also lovely. The male’s (pick a name?) personality is intriguing, he seems to be punishing himself which is absolutely heart-wrenching to read about.
The obsession with his,albeit sooner then most’s, death. The fascination with not getting attached or allowing himself to be in a position for any kind of normality.His purposeful isolation is self destructive and I love the way you wrote it. You can see inside of him, even with his way of pitying himself, you understand it. He just seems to have missed the fact that he’s not dead, that he has had 30 years and an unknown amount of years left. He’s dying, but so is everyone, and as the Taoists so nicely put it if you know what your illness is you can prepare, if you dont know you only die sooner.
I can’t wait for more!</p>

<p>You guys melt my heart :). <3.</p>

<p>Part III</p>

<p>“Bye-bye birdie, wherever you are. You’ve escaped your cage and found your wings.” He barely hears his own words. The wind almost tears the words out his own mouth and sends them speeding past his ears. Somewhere behind him his instructor catches the words.</p>

<p>*The spinning landscape beneath him makes him dizzy. The vortex of wind burns his eyes red. But he isn’t crying. And he doesn’t close his eyes – just as he didn’t close them on the roller coasters he rode decades ago. Someone had told him that closing his eyes would take away the thrill of riding the roller coaster. Someone had let him hold on to his or her hand. It was reassuring. He gripped his left hand with his right and stared at the roofs of houses, which were spinning like toy tops. They reminded him of dreidels. He smiled. The dreidels get bigger, and bigger, and … *</p>

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<p>Your praise makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Well, I already do feel that way, but you make it even warmer and fuzzier :)! I always try to show and not tell with my writing; perhaps that’s how I managed to so well capture the visceral emotion of Meursault/Okonkwo/ultimately anonymous character. </p>

<p>Your quote reminds me of something someone told me … that we all start dying from the day we’re born. That’s definitely one way to look at life; I called it “accumulated damage,” and we die the day the damage is too great to bear, whether it be emotional, or physical, damage. </p>

<p>Speaking of technique, one thing I really tried to highlight in this essay is the alienation of the character from the external world. Whether this is the external world’s fault - whether the external world has alienated itself from people, or whether people have alienated themselves from the external world, is something I explore in my essay … I think I draw the line somewhere down the middle; Meursault’s (I’ll just call him that) alienation is in part due to his affecting of a cold and detached personality, and also in part due to the alienation of the world itself from people (hotel clerk).</p>

<p>I really took a page from the existentialists in this piece - everything from the unnamed main character … well, actually, all the characters are unnamed - to the impersonality of bureaucracy, to Meursault’s rhetoric about other people (that line about empathy - whether feigned or genuine) … to the reduction of Meursault to a person who can only enjoy physical pleasures (sometimes I take them back to my hotel room … yeah … that one awkward line) … and that line about whiskey being his favorite drink … all in imitation of the existentialists! </p>

<p>The piece also makes myriad literary allusions … some of the more obscure ones include a reference to John Donne’s A Valediction: Forbidding Mourning … prize to anyone who finds it. Perhaps most importantly are the personal allusions, that only me and my dear, dear friend can discern and understand :).</p>

<p>Expanding on technique, I write the piece mostly in first-person; two separate people use “I.” Interestingly enough, I subconsciously switched to third-person omniscient in Part III … I’m not sure why … perhaps the third-person better highlights Meursault’s mental insanity … when people think of themselves in third-person, that’s not a good sign (if they’re not actually being facetious) … perhaps it’s a sign that there IS a omniscient and omnipotent being … contrary to Meursault’s speculation regarding an indeterministic/deterministic universe (Part I). But I really don’t know why I switched to third-person … it’s not as if first-person wouldn’t have worked; I don’t actually bring the story up to the moment he crashes into the buildings … I leave it hanging, so first-person would have worked. But subconsciously I switched, and I only noticed afterward … so I wonder what my motivations could have been …</p>

<p>Damn ice.</p>

<p>Damn good</p>

<p>Sent from my TC970 (Wi-Fi) using CC</p>

<p>Qube, good writing. It’s very eloquent.</p>

<p>@IceQube You never cease to make me grin, of course your deep inner writing self has motives your conscious is not fully aware of. (Or it’s really late and I just finished the outline from hell on Candide, and I’m in a giggly mood.)
I like the switched perspective it adds a bit background each individual character can’t give on their own, it provides the reader with a sense of all around knowledge about all characters so no one is left in the dark. Even about the smaller details, I dunno it’s very intricate. I like it.
I can’t think of anything particularly constructive to offer you right now, my brain is dead. I’ll come back later and see if I can offer any right now my caffeine buzz needs to go away and I should //probably// start chem.</p>

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<p>Thank you both :)!</p>

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<p>Yay! Mission accomplished :D. I’ll write, and share, more, for you guys later . . .</p>

<p>I know I promised you guys a Part IV … I actually have it written, but it’s too conventional. I’m overhauling it (completely scrapping the original and rewriting it). Will share later tonight :).</p>

<p>Part IV</p>

<p>*Blink.</p>

<p>Blink.</p>

<p>Blink.</p>

<p>In front of me are what appear to be a thousand doors. Maroon doors. Wide doors. Double doors. </p>

<p>A payphone stands off to the side. </p>

<p>Wait. Didn’t I just go skydiving? I can’t remember exactly how it ended, but I’m sure that I wouldn’t have somehow wound up in this odd place. </p>

<p>The dreidels. The dreidels. Wait. What dreidels. </p>

<p>Those were rooftops. </p>

<p>I had attempted suicide.</p>

<p>Doesn’t seem like I succeeded … but I’m not in a hospital either. </p>

<p>The payphone rings. Wait. I need to make a call. I can’t make a call when it’s ringing. I want to call … I can’t remember. Oh well.*</p>

<p>“Hello?” </p>

<p>“This is God. I am very disappointed in your decision to commit suicide. I hereby direct you to step through that maroon door to your …”</p>

<p>*Clanging. *</p>

<p>“Je m’appelle Albert Camus. Although I commend your adherence to your free will, I cannot condone your decision to commit suicide. Therefore …”</p>

<p>*I’m not going to be lectured to. I’m going to pick a door, a path, a kismet. Isn’t that what we all do? Our parents, by accident or by circumstance, brought us two together. The smallest change – a flap of a butterfly’s wings – could have changed everything. But it all worked out in the end. </p>

<p>The puzzle fell together and we met. Although I can’t remember your name, and everything about you is only a vague memory, I do remember the ecstasy of those heady high school days. And after high school ended, we picked separate doors, walked through them, and closed them behind us. But when God closes a door, he opens another. </p>

<p>And this is just going to be another one of those decisions into which we completely lack prescience. Of these myriad doors, I don’t know which ones will lead to happiness. To melancholy. To pensiveness. To longing. To despair. To remembrance – perhaps my ultimate happiness. </p>

<p>I am by myself; there is no one with whom I can journey. If you – whoever you are! – were here, perhaps we can tackle the darkness collectively. But you are not here. I know, because there is no one here but myself. I’ll just have to pick a door, take a deep breath, and step beyond the threshold, making sure to put my best foot forward. </p>

<p>The grayish door appeals to me. It has a small cat hole, it appears. It also has a small rectangular window. The windows appears to be segmented. Upon closer examination, there are bars behind the glass. Bolts line the perimeter of the door. I tap the door a few times with my knuckles. It is clearly metal. </p>

<p>The knob is like ice. The door swings open as if it were freshly lubricated. </p>

<p>Am I staring down a black hole? </p>

<p>I put the palm of my right hand against the palm of my left hand. There is really something oddly reassuring in familiarity. But instead of interlocking the fingers, I line the fingers up. </p>

<p>Interestingly, the fingers all are of equal length. The other hand also feels calloused; rough - not smooth and silky. These sensations are new, and do not jibe with my memories … </p>

<p>And I dive headfirst into the darkness.</p>

<p>Blink.</p>

<p>Blink.</p>

<p>Blink.</p>

<p>But I do not see.*</p>

<p>Inspiration: 1,000 Doors by Choi Jeong-Hwa</p>