<p>You’re lovely. This in return is also lovely. The male’s (pick a name?) personality is intriguing, he seems to be punishing himself which is absolutely heart-wrenching to read about.
The obsession with his,albeit sooner then most’s, death. The fascination with not getting attached or allowing himself to be in a position for any kind of normality.His purposeful isolation is self destructive and I love the way you wrote it. You can see inside of him, even with his way of pitying himself, you understand it. He just seems to have missed the fact that he’s not dead, that he has had 30 years and an unknown amount of years left. He’s dying, but so is everyone, and as the Taoists so nicely put it if you know what your illness is you can prepare, if you dont know you only die sooner.
I can’t wait for more!</p>