<p>I am in desperate need of some proof readers! Is my essay too boring?</p>
<p>Bump!</p>
<p>Guys, help me out! Please!</p>
<p>ill read yours if you read my main common app one!</p>
<p>Ok deal! I’ll pm you!</p>
<p>This is the “Why Northwestern?” type essay, right? Mine’s sort of boring-ish too… then again, I’m applying to the School of Engineering, and there’s really not much I can say about that. There’s a professor there whose a holocaust-denier, but I don’t want to talk too much about that.</p>
<p>Yeah, but whatever right? The question IS boring! Haha!</p>
<p>Absolutely. Yours is an essay? Mine’s like… 3 paragraphs.</p>
<p>heyyyy i already sent you my esssays, but u never sent me yours!</p>
<p>Oh hi onhcetum. I can’t access your essays… It says “Cuisine” is deleted. My essays are sort of incomplete. =/</p>
<p>hey, i gave u the new links. you dont really have to check for any grammar mistakes bc ive read it over like 200 times. just check it content-wise and if it gets the message across or not</p>
<p>thank you!</p>
<p>Ah yes, I see. Reviewing it now.</p>
<p>Haha this post is being taken over! And no, it’s not an essay… I guess? What’s an essay anyway? I’m just telling them why I want to attend that school =)</p>
<p>An essay would be something that has an introductory paragraph of sorts, then the proper stuff in the middle, and then a concluding paragraph. Mine definitely isn’t that.</p>
<p>And sorry for taking over, I’ll stop now. =)</p>
<p>No, please, continue. I guess mine is an essay, then. I’m just stressed out about my common application essay right now. It has over 900 words. I read that that is WAY to much… I’m trying to cut it now… How long is your personal essay?</p>
<p>My personal essay is about 600 words… though that shouldn’t discourage you from writing a longer one. I’m trying to expand it a bit more, 600 seems a bit short for the main essay.</p>
<p>I’m helping get this even more off-topic, but mine is about a page long. I guess you could say it’s an essay…
I made the first paragraph attention-grabbing, but the rest of it is pretty boring.
I feel like they must get pretty much the same answer from everyone, but I don’t know what to do to make mine stand out. :/</p>
<p>Steven, I can read it and try to give you some comments. goodluck.</p>