Need an Urgent help in the Essay, Please

<p>Hi.
I've registered for the upcoming Oct test, which is after about 12 days only, and, unfortunately, my essay sucks.
I can't complete even the second body paragraph in the 25 mins. My style of writing isn't that good. The examples I use are mostly from " House M.D " series, it actually contains a lot of subplots that can fit into any topic, along with a personal experience, mostly made up. I've taken May 2014 test and scored 8. The topic was about should leaders follow their own convictions or give up to the public opinion; I used " Julius Ceasar " and another made up story to support my thesis. The second example especially really sucks. I wasn't able to complete the second body paragraph, and of course, to write a conclusion.
I hope there is a way by which I can reach a 11 - 12 score in the coming test.
Thanks.</p>

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