<p>On my college app essay, topic of your own choice, I am currently at 566 words. I've had my teacher and my friends twice edit it, because it was at 638 at the beginning. I'm actually debating if I should keep on shortening or keep it at 566.</p>
<p>Ok, I just got help from a second friend and along with the first one, we cut the essay down to 510 words. There’s a sentence in my essay whih I kind of like, but if I take it out, I’m at 493 words. So can I get a third opinion on whether I should keep it and stay over 500 or trash to get under 500</p>
<p>I’m pretty good at cutting words. If you’d like, PM it.</p>