Would anyone like to read my personal essay for the Common App and suggest what I cut down?

College Essays
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<p>My essay is 825 words and needs to be 650!</p>

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<p>Yes,
send it to me. PM me if you want to know details. I’d love to read your essay.
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<p>Sure. I suggest you be careful about whom you send your esay too, though. My essay last year was 2000 words cut down to 650!</p>

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<p>I can help trim it. </p>