Need Help Editing Down My Personal Statement (UC Transfer Prompt)

Hey everyone!

I finished writing one of my personal statements (the UC transfer prompt) a bit ago and I was wondering if any of you could help review it and/or edit it down by about 100-150 words. I know that’s a tall order, so I apologize in advance.

Thanks for your time.

Hey there,

I’d be happy to give you some quick comments on your essay. PM me!

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