Need help - fixing translation of the article "~ 600 families of Exodus" into English

<p>Dear friends, can you check orthography and grammar (not sense) of my translation into English of my very interesting article, please?!</p>

<p>I'm Russian (by my soul with Ukrainians now) and English is not my native language, but I'm zeal to acquaint English-speaking world to very new scientific results for free.</p>

<p>This is a link to the whole text <a href="http://bible-exodus.eu.pn/articles/numbers/en_bible_numbers_brief_2013.html"&gt;http://bible-exodus.eu.pn/articles/numbers/en_bible_numbers_brief_2013.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p>

<p>It seems better to use for fixing the Ms Word in the fixing regime? - so I can see all the changes immediately ...</p>

<p>Or, if there is any hardness copy that block just over here in forum to disscus it ...</p>

<p>Or, just give me an advise, please, where and who can help me?</p>

<p>Thanks a lot!
Sasha, Crimea</p>