Need help refining my UC Personal Statement!

Hi, I would like some opinions on my UC Personal statement (both prompts). I have just finished my first, very rough draft of my statement and would like to know if what I’m writing about is good, because that’s what I have struggled with the most. I don’t really have anything exciting or noteworthy to talk about, so my topic is somewhat mundane. Should I include something about how I failed AP Calculus AB and explain why I did and what I did to remedy it? Or should that go under additional comments?

Please help; I really hate writing about myself… and it’s almost November 30th(!)

I will PM you the google doc link, just write a comment.
Thank you in advance!!!

I’d be glad to take a look if you still need it. I’m still working out the kinks in mine too.

Np…Pm me

I am doing the same, review each others’? PM me.