Need Opinion on Essay Topic (Promp 1)

<p>Hello,</p>

<p>I chose prompt one and wrote a draft, but I am currently doubting whether it is too risk of a topic or even if my essay answers prompt one. Could you please PM, if you are interested in helping me decide whether to rewrite my college essay.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance</p>

<p>I’m doing the same thing and sort of have the same feelings for my essay but I’ll look over yours. PM me</p>