Need some advice on a super weird essay...

College Essays
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<p>So I answered the second common app essay prompt asking about a failure I've experienced:</p>

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Recount an incident or time when you experienced failure. How did it affect you, and what lessons did you learn?

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<p>But what I wrote about is probably really really weird, and I really need to know whether or not if it was okay to write about it since my first college deadline is approaching (Oct 15th). If it's alright, I would appreciate it if someone could give me feedback on how it was written and point out anything bad (be as brutally honest as possible). </p>

<p>So if it's okay with anyone (who preferably isn't in the application process currently - sorry for the paranoia), please comment, and i'll pm my essay to you!</p>

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<p>Bump… really need some advice here!</p>

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<p>I’d love to help, but I am currently also in the admissions process. I’ve already written my common app essay and it’s very specific to my personal experience and EC, so I can give you my word that I won’t steal yours</p>

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<p>PM me and I’ll read it :)</p>

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<p>PM and I’ll read it too!</p>

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<p>neuromajor already helped me out for the most part, and I already asked a couple others to proofread my new draft, but thank you for offering!</p>

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<p>i have the weirdest essays in the world so i would LOVE to read yours
just PM it to me and ill give you some thoughts!</p>

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<p>^^ woops just saw that you’ve got all the help you need.
well since you said your essay is atypical would you be interested in reading my weird essay?</p>