<p>Hey guys, so I just finished my first draft for this essay...but one problem: its 837 words long! I know for a fact that I need to shorten it, but how should I know what to take out and what not to? How many words over 500 is acceptable? I think that 500 words is awfully hard to keep an essay down to! Any advice on your experience on shortening an essay or any other advice in general? - Thanks! </p>
<p>Don’t be afraid to delete entire paragraphs. Delete whatever seems overly wordy, tangential (unless it’s truly humorous/poignant) or already stated. If you’re reading over a paragraph and your attention span starts to waver, remove that paragraph. You’re trying to pack a punch with 500 words not make the adcoms fall asleep with 800.</p>