<p>I need help on improving my essay! I would greatly appreciate the help .Also the college essay is 570 words and its supposed to be 500 words. Please this is my only hope to getting into my dream school.</p>
<p>I need help on improving my essay! I would greatly appreciate the help .Also the college essay is 570 words and its supposed to be 500 words. Please this is my only hope to getting into my dream school.</p>