Essay Critique

<p>I'm looking for someone who could look over my essay and offer me some feedback on it. Whether it be the content itself or grammatical errors, anything would be appreciated.</p>

<p>Also just as a general question, my essay is 467 words, but the application asks for 500-700. Would I be okay with what I have or should I expand it?</p>

<p>I would be interested, please send it via PM and I’ll reply back with the errors that I found grammatically and any other concerns ASAP.</p>