I’ve always promised myself to avoid the annoying “chance me” threads, let alone to create one myself. However, seeing as though I will not be able to sleep without SOME self assurance, I have made the decision to try it out, perhaps receive some constructive criticism. Please be honest and real with your responses.
APPLICATION STATUS: AWAITING DECISION (Regular Decision Applicant)
Objective:
SAT I: N/A
ACT: 29 Composite, 36 English, 30 Reading, 25 Science, 25 Math, 11 Writing
SAT II: 740 Literature, 660 Mathematics 1, 720 Spanish Reading
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.6
Rank: Top 10% of roughly 400 students in my class
AP (place scores in parenthesis): AP Microeconomics (2), AP US Government (3), AP US History (5), AP Language and Composition (5), AP Biology (N/A), AP Literature (N/A), AP Physics 1 (N/A)
Senior year course load: Honors Spanish 4, AP Biology, AP Physics 1, AP Literature, College Algebra (Pre-Calculus), Trigonometry, SPECIAL OUT-OF-SCHOOL: EMT Training Program (Early Dismissal)
Major Awards: PSAE Scholor, AP Scholar
Subjective:
Extracirriculars: Club Medicine (Member, 2 years), Spanish Honors Society (1 year, Member), Student Ambassador (2 years), Club MECA (1 year, Board Member), International Club (2 years, President of Advertisement), Phi Alpha Theta (Member, 1 year), National Honors Society (1 year), Athletic Training (1 year), EMT Training Program (3 hours a day, 3 days a week, rigorous medical program)
Job/Work Experience: Father’s restaurant in economically challenged region
Volunteer/Community Service: 100+ Hours volunteering at my local religious service, student athletic training room, Student Ambassador school events, local hospital volunteer
Summer Activities: N/A
Essays: Excellent on the Common App, very professional and outstanding. (I’m an excellent writer. I’m writing a book.)
Harvard Supplemental Essays: Submitted a sample of spontaneous creative writing piece (amazing quality of writing), submitted another one-page essay that speaks of my overwhelming desire to pursue medicine at Harvard, my struggles in realizing the ACT was just a number, and that I refuse to allow it to define who I am and what I can be.
Teacher recommendation: First letter was from AP English teacher, very excellent writing, strong, unique descriptions of my character, and speaks of a specific time when I lost a dear friend of mine, a former English teacher and a close friend of the teacher that wrote this letter.
Second letter of recommendation: My freshman biology teacher speaks very eloquently of my character and work ethics, and her views of me as a student. Very good.
Additional letters: One from my mother, very beautiful and heartwarming. Another one from my EMT/Paramedic instructor, very professional and precise. I’m waiting on one more excellent letter from my Club Medicine and Sports Medicine teacher.
Interview: Very perfect interview, I hit all the right spots and displayed sincere interest in Harvard College.
Other:
State: Illinois, USA
School type: Public, 400 students in my class alone, about 2,500 total.
Ethnicity: Middle-East Caucasian
Gender: Male
Income bracket: <$25,000, very low
Hooks: Low income, only me and my brother will be attending college
Any ideas? I’m very passionate regarding my desire to become a general surgeon and I’m very out-going, and aware of my future plans. Thank you.