<p>This time, not over the top risky but still risky. Check it out?</p>
<p>You have it written? New Notre Dame student here, happy to take a look.</p>
<p>Sent. Oh and ignore grammar errors =P</p>
<p>bump! 10char.</p>
<p>Still looking for critique!</p>
<p>Thanks DolorousEdd.</p>
<p>I’ll look it over! PM it :)</p>
<p>Lol, seriously? Everyone should read it!</p>
<p>Hopefully your joking about that essay. ;).</p>
<p>^ Comments like these… -_- I do not want to back to the drawing board for the sixth time</p>
<p>No, but bashing ND really would NOT be an ideal ‘essay’. I know they said to take a risk…but your almost on the edge of profanity.</p>
<p>I… seriously I am at a loss of words.</p>
<p>Not like 40 year olds are going to read this essay, it’ll be recent ND graduates who know that the list is silly enough to be taken as a joke. And besides there’s two essays to the supplement, this is the first and the other will make it obvious that I’m just messing with them in the first essay -_-</p>
<p>Honestly, knowing everything I do, I found most of it pretty funny. There are two other ND-specific essays, so you’ll also be able to show why you really want to go.</p>