<p>Well im at -1. Im reasonably confident that “That the funding…” was correct as is. So i have -1 so far! Dang it. If i get an 11, which i did last time, I could get an 800!</p>
<p>oh i think i put at the end of the second to last paragraph. the one where it said he crashed but he didn’t stop building planes. i put it right there</p>
<p>so you left the “too” in there? i was trying to figure out whether to remove it or to leave it. i think i left as is. cause i felt like the too was kind of awkward but it was necessary.</p>
<p>(this question was probably easy) but to improve the part about the wright brothers. did you say during the time the wright brothers blah blah blah, [asian guys name] was blah blah blah</p>
<p>ummmmmm i totally didn’t put the talk more about chinatown one. i don’t even know. i am just wrong on everything for these paragraph improvements</p>
<p>LOL me2.</p>
<p>I just remembered i put B for the improve wright brothers part. It was to TAKE OUT the WHEN.</p>
<p>ALSO TELL ME HOW MANY NO ERRORS U GUYS GOT</p>
<p>i cant remember…i know i got that one right though. cause all the other answers were a joke</p>
<p>I had the board game improving paragraphs and had 1 NE (Burton getting pizza in Chicago), but I was unsure about “that the…” I had it as NE, but then in a later section I saw that used so I guess that means 2 NEs? Not too positive.</p>
<p>Also an improving paragraph question, it’s best to delete the sentence about how to get a club started on campus?</p>
<p>oh sorry gensis i just reread your last 2 posts and i seriously missed like 6 lines that you typed. like i asked a question that you had already answered hahaha</p>
<p>i’m not sure how many NE i put because i didn’t think too much about anything that wasn’t paragraph improvement. i wasn’t stuck on anything so i don’t remember it, you know? but i’m positive i got 1-2 NE. not that many at all. </p>
<p>WAIT this might sound ■■■■■■■■ but question #12 or something early was something about a girl under the guidance of her father became some golf champion or something. was that NE?</p>
<p>I AM SURE THAT THERE WERE 3 NO ERRORS NOW THAT THE “RECORDING IT” QUESTION IS RESOLVED.</p>
<p>tHE 3rd no error was the first problem of the page wit the last four problems of the sentence identifying errors section.</p>
<p>Yeah no error. The one after that was an error tho : subject-verb agreement</p>
<p>What was the first problem of the page with the last four problems? Like, the actual sentence?</p>
<p>^i don’t quite remember. i just remember looking at my answer sheet after finishing aand seeng that one of the NE’s was on that page.</p>
<p>What did you guys get for the question in the 10 min section about the filming thing?</p>
<p>It was like “The traffic was kept off the bridge for three hours while a crucial scene of a movie was being filmed” </p>
<p>I put no error although i remember myself debating on that and “while filming a crucial scene of the movie”</p>
<p>While filming a crucial scene</p>
<p>has no subject to it. Who’s filming it? Lol its exactly like the one you got wrong :P</p>
<p>^Yes i got that right!!! That was actually my reason for eliminating “while filming a crucial scene”</p>
<p>-1 and 11 essay=800!!! :)</p>
<p>:) good job dude</p>
<p>Ugh, that’s one I got wrong. I was stuck between those two and picked the wrong one. I had 4 NEs in the last 10 minute section. And that one was an NE, so is that 5?</p>
<p>I believe I had 2 NE’s in the 10 min section? I forget tho. Idk</p>
<p>@backfling: I got NE for that one as well (A) since the rest were wrong.</p>
<p>I actually had a lot of NE’s in the last section
3 or 4.</p>
<p>I cant remember. i got NE for #14 i think and NE for the film one. Can you remember any others that might have had NE? Even if it’s a little portion.
That may trigger something in me; I have pretty darn good memory.</p>
<p>anyone know what the fong yue paragraph improvement “what would improve this?” one where the answer choices were “say more about CHinatown” or “say more about the first flight” was?</p>