<p>I put say more about chinatown.</p>
<p>why?
wasn’t the entire passage about his biography tho?</p>
<p>Didn’t put “write more about Chinatown”, either. I think I said talk more about his success building planes (or was that not an option? LOL)</p>
<p>I know I had at least 1-2 NE as well.</p>
<p>Well, my reasoning was because:</p>
<p>The conclusion of the essay was. In Dragonwings, the author composes both a picture of the airplane builder and a imaginative recreation of Chinatown in the 1900s.</p>
<p>I didnt see anything about chinatown, so i wuz like: maybe i shuld include that lol</p>
<p>@qtwvhr
yeah, it was an option
“talk more about fong’s first success at flight”</p>
<p>So which section is the experiment? Section 2 (planes) or the other section…section 6?</p>
<p>RatedRAWR: oh good, I’m not completely out of it.</p>
<p>gensis: Now that you mention it, I can see why you chose Chinatown… darn…!!</p>
<p>Section 6 was experimental.</p>
<p>Wondering what you guys put for the one where it said:</p>
<p>What information should be put in the essay to improve it.</p>
<p>So far the main opinions are : Write more about chinatown (me)
Include more about the successful flight (other ppl) lol</p>
<p>Here’s my reasoning:</p>
<p>The conclusion of the essay was. In Dragonwings, the author composes both a picture of the airplane builder and a imaginative recreation of Chinatown in the 1900s.</p>
<p>I didnt see anything about chinatown, so I thought that you needed to add things about Chinatown to make the conclusion work.</p>
<p>What did you guys think?</p>
<p>Well, that’s certainly not cool. D:
I found section 6 a lot easier.</p>
<p>@gensis
i still don’t get why it would be chinatown…
wanna elaborate?</p>
<p>Bump up plz answer</p>
<p>I put that as well.</p>
<p>Do you remember the improving sentence one - where it talked about the second plane crashing unfortunately, and you could remove “too” or leave it as is?</p>
<p>Well, I left it as it was.</p>
<p>what did you get for the “continental congress question”?</p>
<p>I think I put A.</p>
<p>I removed it. It me, it seemed to disrupt the flow of the sentence, but thats just me.</p>
<p>Also, for the last question, what should be added to the conclusion.</p>
<p>Did you guys put: Although he set out to write a biography of his life, the author… blah blah</p>
<p>Please answer the question above!!!</p>
<p>No need to bump so quickly, it’s late at night.</p>
<p>I put ‘more about the successful flight’ and, while I can’t remember the question, I think I did answer something like ‘biography of his life then wrote Dragonwings instead’.</p>
<p>I also put something about ‘In this time’ for the ‘Wright Brothers were becoming famous when the guy built from his own ways’ question, since the sentence before it mentioned the early 20th century.</p>
<p>Did you choose the choice that included : remove “when” ?</p>
<p>Experimental section was the one with only 23 questions right?</p>