Decision: Accepted - CAS
Posting a bit late. I have mixed feelings about College Confidential. These types of forums, however, always helped while I was looking into and applying for colleges, so I decided a while back that I’d post my own decision here once I received it.
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 2370 (800 W, 800 CR, 770 M)
ACT: N/A
SAT II: 790 Lit, 780 US History, 730 Spanish, 750 Bio
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 4.0
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): School doesn’t rank
AP (place score in parenthesis): US History (5), Bio (5), Env Sci (5), Lang/Comp (5) Euro (4)
IB (place score in parenthesis): N/A
Senior Year Course Load: AP Calc AB, AP Physics, AP English IV, Student Council, AP Gov/Econ, Spanish IB HL2
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): National Merit Semifinalist, various private/regional writing awards
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis):
Freelance writer
- Have been writing my whole life. Sixteen pieces published in various literary magazines, anthologies, and newspapers.
- Seven writing awards in various private and regional competitions
- Interviewed as youngest “Author of the Month” in The Missing Slate’s history
Student Council
- Commissioner of Clubs & Organizations: Carried out various initiatives to revamp dying club culture at school, created new, improved clubs website, digitized Club Constitution/Club Minutes process, started Club of the Week, began Club Points system to invigorate club spirit
- Sophomore Class Secretary: Raised $5,000 for Class of 2015/ sold out Talent Show and Film Fest, organized steering committees, t-shirt sales, class color change, etc.
Other
- Raised $6000 in walk-a-thon to study abroad in Buenos Aires, Argentina for a month to hone Spanish at local academy and live with my adorable host grandmother!
- Founder/prez of charitable organization which sends personalized art to terminally-ill children
- Founder/prez of Asian Culture club (You don’t have to be Asian to join!)
Job/Work Experience: High school blogger for test prep company (I work minimum wage. WOOOO, STARVIN WRITERS, YEAH!
Volunteer/Community service:
- Transcriber for prison reform radio program: I transcribe and proofread handwritten letters from federal and state prisoners to the organization.
- Peace Corps Campus Ambassador: Recruited as only high schooler in nationwide Peace Corps Ambassador program. Helped organize recruitment, outreach strategies, worked to promote Peace Corps at school with regional recruiter. I strongly encourage other applicants to apply as a high schooler--NOT for college, but because Peace Corps is just a gorgeous organization, and there should be more awareness at the high school level. The job is meant for universities, so my case was a little unusual, but hey--apply anyways! That's what I did.
- Designed over 1000 bandanas for cuties looking for a home at local animal shelters to help improve chances of adoption.
- Second Reader Editor for Polyphony HS- International Magazine-- reaches dozens of countries
Summer Activities: Fundraising, studying abroad in Argentina, working on Women Weave the Web campaign, freelance writing/submitting to publications, Camp NaNoWriMo, writing articles for minimum wage (woo), Student Council work, editing for magazine, traveling, organizing campaigns for my organization
Essays (rating 1-10, details):
I don’t think I can give an accurate “rating” for my essays. I tried my best–I wrote at my best.
Personal statement: About working as a transcriber for a radio program even though volunteers had to be “18 years and older.” Showed how I hate staying within my comfort zone and how I challenged my traditional beliefs about prisoners. Talked about importance of empathy and my passion for prison reform.
Why Penn: My best “Why” essay out of all the colleges I applied to. Talked about being an idealist, pursuing research under a Fels professor, continuing my student-run organization at Penn, interdisciplinary programs, etc.
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details):
Teacher Rec #1: 7 - From Activities Director at school/in charge of Student Council and Mock Trial. I’ve known him since freshman year. He thinks I’m “shy” though, so idk how accurate the rec was…
Teacher Rec #2: 9 - From Chem teacher who was also my class advisor while I was a class officer-- known since freshman year. I love her! It should’ve been good.
Counselor Rec: 9 - We got along really well, and she was a sweet lady. We weren’t really close, though.
Additional Rec: 10 - From online employer; very, very good.
Interview: Online interview over video chat. She was super nice, especially considering I was late to my own interview. We scheduled for 5:00, but I didn’t realize she meant 5 in her time zone…I was still at school in my time zone, so she was waiting for like twenty minutes before I realized what was happening. Oopssss.
Other
State (if domestic applicant): Katy Perry
Country (if international applicant): The Best One, obv.
School Type: Public
Ethnicity: Filial piety yo ((o)/)
Gender: Lady
Income Bracket: <60,000 (We’re not doing so well right now–just moved.)
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): To be honest, I’m an Asian from a well-off suburb in California. Not much going for me hook-wise
Reflection
Strengths: Good writer, unique ec’s that I’m passionate about.
Weaknesses: I refuse to say that being Asian is my weakness because secretly it is my strength. Kimchi is love. Kimchi is life.
Why you think you were accepted/waitlisted/rejected: Honestly surprised bc the RD acceptance rate was around 7%. I was completely shocked when I got my decision–but this was definitely my strongest application.
Where else were you accepted/waitlisted/rejected: Accepted - USC, UCLA, UC Berkeley, George Washington University; Waitlisted - Yale, Georgetown; Rejected: Harvard, Princeton, Columbia, Stanford
General Comments: Congrats to everyone who got in; to those who didn’t, all of you are extremely impressive. Please don’t think this is a reflection of how valuable you are as a person.
To future applicants: Focus not on doing as many things as possible, but concentrating on the things that really matter to you. I made the mistake of trying to do too many things, and in the end, I didn’t even have room to fit it all in the Common App. Just breathe and do what you are passionate about.