One of my best essays! Due in 48 hours, Please Help!

<p>Finally completed my admission essay! I have to take it with me when I go up to UF on Saturday.</p>

<p>Please help me polish it, let me know of any grammar errors or anything you see that you don't like or anything I can add/change to would make the essay better.</p>

<p>Leave your email address or a little note here and I'll PM you.</p>

<p>Thanks
Alex</p>

<p>UF has there 08 app up already?</p>

<p>Its for a program I'm attending and they're asking us to bring our essays.</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

<p>ill read it =)
pm me plz</p>

<p>I have PM'ed you my work.</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>These "My best essay ever!!!" threads always intrigue me. I'll read it =)</p>

<p>PM's sent.</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

<p>I'll read it:)</p>