<p>Finally completed my admission essay! I have to take it with me when I go up to UF on Saturday.</p>
<p>Please help me polish it, let me know of any grammar errors or anything you see that you don't like or anything I can add/change to would make the essay better.</p>
<p>Leave your email address or a little note here and I'll PM you.</p>
<p>Thanks
Alex</p>