<p>I'm sure no adcom cares about your teenage romance story. Does that theme sound trite? Yes; thus it won't set you apart in any positive way. Come on, you aren't writing to a bunch of bleeding heart kids. Adcoms are salty old pirates sifting through a trove of treasure just for the sake of throwing out pieces with obvious tarnishes.
Think of who your audience will be and then ask yourself what your "love story" is going to bring to HARVARD.</p>
<p>By the way, does Harvard have any good weight-lifting facilities that can be accessed by non-athlete students? If so, are they busy?
I'm splitting hairs...</p>