Parents: critique my college essays?

<p>"newbie" at this whole process. i need advice. any kind of advice. </p>

<p>Sorry for posting in the Parents' section. I didn't want others to "steal" my essay ideas.</p>

<p>blueducky, there's no guarantee that the parents are who they say they are, or that they might not steal essay ideas for their kids.</p>

<p>Thanks for the advice. The world is just full of vicious people, isn't it?</p>