<p>Hi parents,</p>
<p>I really need some opinions on my college essays (there's 2, but they go hand-in-hand). The problem is that they're very... strange. I really just need someone to read them over and tell me if they make sense, and maybe make a few suggestions. I'll be applying ED to Princeton, if that's relevent. If anyone wants to just maybe skim over them, I would greatly appreciate it!!! Thanks for taking the time to read this. :)</p>
<p>You can PM me, koala.</p>
<p>Thanks so much jmmom (and ADad and apajas)! I really appreciate this. And if anyone else would like to look over them, i would certainly welcome those opinions as well! :D</p>
<p>koala - I have your essays, just cannot respond as the PM function doesn't work from China where I will be for the next two weeks. I will try to figure it out and get you some feedback.</p>
<p>Alumother - please don't worry about it!!! You don't even have to look at all of them... as i recall, i sent you a lot of stuff, which in retrospect was extremely rude of me. :( Enjoy China!!! :D</p>