Peer edit my personal statement? Will return the favor!

<p>I am a high school senior currently writing my personal statement (prompt #1). I need to finish it by this Sunday to be considered for merit scholarships at Claremont McKenna. I already have a draft ready, so I really just need a good editor. My essay is about my father's drug addiction, alcoholism, and abusive nature. I am open to any and all help, but would probably prefer help from current college students (preferably at a top 30 school), someone applying to top 20 schools, or perhaps parents. I am applying to Harvard, Princeton, Stanford, UChicago, Pomona, CMC, and NYU, among others. PM if you want to help.
Thank you for reading and hopefully helping </p>