Penn Pg. 217 Essay--Should I add mine?

College Essays
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<p>Hey everyone, </p>

<p>I wrote a page 217 essay for Penn, but it's a little bland in my opinion. Would anyone be willing to look at it for me? I'd love a critique but even if you can just say, "yeah, I'd add it", or "no, leave it at home", I'd really appreciate just some honest opinions. </p>

<p>Let me know if your up for it! I need readers today, though. I'm applying ED.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it for you!</p>

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<p>Anyone else? I’d really appreciate it. You don’t even have to take the time to write out long comments. Just a simple yes or no is good enough for me! :)</p>

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<p>eh sure I read your other stuff and they were pretty creative so I’d love to read this</p>

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<p>Thanks!! I’m going to PM it to you now.</p>

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<p>hey i’d love to read it!</p>

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<p>I already submitted it because the deadline was November 1st, but thanks for the offer! :)</p>