<p>Hi, My Penn essay--the page 217 one if you're familiar--was just completed. I need quick feedback please. If you're not applying there, I'd be glad for the opinions/critique.
The question was:
"You've just completed your 300 page autobiography. Submit page 217."
I'll PM you the essay. It's somewhat long, only one page though.</p>
<p>Haha, I say "mmkay" all the time. </p>
<p>I'd review it for you, but I'm a Penn hopeful as well, lol. I tried to write that essay... ended up going with the risk option instead, and it turned out pretty well. Good luck!</p>
<p>I'm not applying to Penn. I'll read it.</p>
<p>Thank you. I sent it to you both even though sphair is applying to penn. he seems trusthworthy.</p>
<p>I've edited a bit from their suggestions. any more readers? lol I guess I'm nervous.</p>
<p>bump. (ten)</p>
<p>sure shoot it over</p>
<p>over here</p>
<p>I'll read it. Sounds like an interesting prompt.
I've already gotten into Caltech, so no need to worry. :)</p>
<p>I'll read it, have it back within 15 min.</p>
<p>procrastinating aren't we? pm me a copy and i'll try to give it a look</p>
<p>i'll take a read if you still need feedback, but try to get it to me in the next ten minutes if you want feedback today.</p>