personal statement, first draft. any takers?

College Essays
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<p>This is just my first draft, and I can tell needs some work. If anyone would be willing to look over it, that would be great!</p>

2

<p>sure I think I can take a look :)</p>

3

<p>I will take a look if you want.</p>

4

<p>i sent a pm. anyone else? :]</p>

5

<p>ill take a look. pm me</p>

6

<p>pmed. anymore pleease?</p>

7

<p>i'll take a look.</p>

8

<p>pm me and i'll check it out</p>

9

<p>I'll read it; just PM me!</p>

10

<p>pm me, please. thanks</p>

11

<p>i would read it too, pm me</p>