Please Chance Me :)

I am currently at a CC with the intent on transferring to UCLA and Berkeley.
My GPA is 3.68.
I have completed all of the prereqs.
I have finished IGETC.
I plan on writing about how I was a poor student in high school, received my GED and went on to achieve good grades and completely change the course of my life.
My EC’s include volunteer work, PTK, speaking to incoming students at the alternative school I went to, political science club and a full time job since I was 17.
Oh and my major is Poli Sci.
Thank you for any kind of input!