<p>The basis of the essay is about my first experience performing on stage. I'm not sure if I reflected enough on the experience. Any one want to help critique for me?</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>The basis of the essay is about my first experience performing on stage. I'm not sure if I reflected enough on the experience. Any one want to help critique for me?</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>