<p>I just wrote my first draft for my college essay (an essay of my choice) and I don't know if it's any good or not! I just want to get some feedback and see if I'm on track or not! I'd appreciate any help! Thanks so much!</p>
<p>I just wrote my first draft for my college essay (an essay of my choice) and I don't know if it's any good or not! I just want to get some feedback and see if I'm on track or not! I'd appreciate any help! Thanks so much!</p>